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Tue Apr 21, 2009, 1:39 PM

Mood: Caring
Listening to: Belle Nuit and O Mio Babbino Caro
Reading: Sheet Music

Hey again, long time no see. I rarely update as I'm rarely on. My sister-in-law is due May 15th and I'm excited for my niece/nephew.

Synfull is coming to town then we're shipping off to New Zealand for a little over two weeks in the summer. She's been mentioning me a lot in journals and I don't do anything for her so...shout out to Syn.

I'm finally graduating from high school in May. Yay.

Now for the actual critique part of this journal. I hardly post art but I would like some sincere critiques. I'm not asking you to be nice, but if there is something you think I could improve on, please point it out.

Thanks,
Mali

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~DarkChaosPaladin Apr 21, 2009, 4:56:14 PM

Oh, critique Mali time? That's usually dangerous!

Speaking of New Zealand, did Cam give you your gym clothes and tiny flask?

~Malpercio Apr 21, 2009, 7:07:13 PM

Yes he did, I love my flask. xD

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Im as changing as the winds, flowing like the water, growing like the trees, wise as an ancient rock, powerful like lightning, and as passionate as fire, all put into one little girl.Im an enigma wrapped in a puzzle, shrouded in mystery lost in a labrynth

*Nakarie Apr 22, 2009, 7:43:34 AM

AIYOOHHH YEAH. I'VE BEEN A FAILTARD IN THE COMMENT DEPARTMENT HUH?

Feel free to throw heavy objects at my head. :I

But I think it's a given for pretty much EVERYONE that anatomy can ALWAYS be improved upon.
Unless you're an art god, but I don't think the most of us are so there. :I

But uhhh...I dunno, what would you like point outs on?
Because "something you think I could improve on" is pretty vague. xDD

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~margo-mango Apr 24, 2009, 8:08:38 PM

new zealand thats awesome, and i would critique your art if i had any knowledge of how to do half the stuff you do with your art

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But because i knew you...I have been changed for good
Rest in peace Jamison

~Malpercio Apr 25, 2009, 2:03:34 PM

Aww thanks, and I'm excited. What do you want me to bring you back?

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Im as changing as the winds, flowing like the water, growing like the trees, wise as an ancient rock, powerful like lightning, and as passionate as fire, all put into one little girl.Im an enigma wrapped in a puzzle, shrouded in mystery lost in a labrynth

~Malpercio Apr 25, 2009, 2:04:32 PM

I dunno, coloring technique? Specific parts of anatomy? xD I don't really know, hence why it's so vague.

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Im as changing as the winds, flowing like the water, growing like the trees, wise as an ancient rock, powerful like lightning, and as passionate as fire, all put into one little girl.Im an enigma wrapped in a puzzle, shrouded in mystery lost in a labrynth

*Nakarie Apr 25, 2009, 8:57:40 PM

Heh, alright. Just a quick questions though,
would you like a general crit on your arts next time?
Or crit on the specific piece?

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~Malpercio Apr 25, 2009, 9:08:56 PM

Specific pieces would be better.

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Im as changing as the winds, flowing like the water, growing like the trees, wise as an ancient rock, powerful like lightning, and as passionate as fire, all put into one little girl.Im an enigma wrapped in a puzzle, shrouded in mystery lost in a labrynth